Peer review

 

 Today during class, we had another group review the film opening that my teammates and I produce. They gave their unfiltered thoughts of our film and how we can improve upon it. So here was a couple of their thoughts, add a bigger and menacing font to hit on the genre. Fade out music instead of abrupt cut, so the transition is smoother in the film opening. Add voice overs of Violet's thought while the librarian is talking, due to the fact that the character personality is on the quite/receive side. By adding that it enhances that characteristic.  

They also suggest cutting out the shot of her leaving the building, because it does not move well with the other shots. They also stated that it needed more sound effects like breathing in a couple of shots, to that the stalker is there in the background. The reviver wishes for more vice over for the character Violet, so they can relate and understand her. More about her home live and who she is as a person.  

Later on, they also wanted the last shot, of when violet looks around after reading the note to be a still one instead. Because they state that the push in movement was not scary or gives the feeling that her situation is truly dangerous. 

With these suggestions, my team and I went back to working on the film. With it the editor did the changes that we agreed on needed to be change.